This is why we get proofs...

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Real Estate Agent with Select Realty Professionals

...and also why I always ask advertising vendors not to cut any of the verbiage from my ads.

What I said:

Looking for a home with historic charm but without the historic headaches? You've found it in this beautifully remodeled 1920's farmhouse. Granite countertops, stainless appliances, fireplace, & tri-level deck including a balcony from your owner's suite. Lots of space inside and out with large fenced back yard. Just past the state line on Ooltewah Ringgold Rd, this Georgia home is in the country but close to the city. $199,900 Buy this lovely old home with $0 down & $1,063.73/mo. Possible lease purchase also available.

And this is the proof that I got...

Now if you read it carefully, you'll see that it no longer says "...this Georgia home is in the country but close to the city." It's been changed to "...this Georgia home is in the country." Umm, OK, I guess that's factual although not what I was trying to communicate, but that isn't so very bad right?

But then if you look a little further down you'll see that "Buy this lovely old home..." (injecting a little bit of hokey Southern charm I thought!) has been changed to "Buy this old home."

Yeah, that's not at ALL what I was trying to say.

And that is why we get proofs.

By the way, 369 Ooltewah-Ringgold Rd is a lovely old home chock full of Southern charm. Check out this Ringgold home for sale.

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Jennifer Schaefer
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Between this and the dolls you seem to be having quite the day!

Jul 27, 2010 05:25 PM #1
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Diane Williams
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I don't believe you would have received much activity from the ad with "old home" advertised.  LOL

Jul 27, 2010 06:12 PM #2
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Julia Odom
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Oh Jennifer, it's only getting worse. I'm about to post something else....stay tuned.

Diane, I wonder how many people would even notice?

Jul 27, 2010 06:38 PM #3
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Oh Julia - this one makes me smile.  Sooooo many times I've been down this road over the years.  It's almost sad thinking about it.  We don't do much print advertising anymore so our in house staff KNOWS they need to shine!  I"m still laughing........good luck on getting this old home with So down SOLD!

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Ahh yes, the foibles of artistic license : )  There's a reason why we say the things we do, and unless we're working with someone who understands real estate, we need to pay extra special super-duper attention to our marketing materials.  Great post.

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